The table below shows the numbers of visitors to Ashdown Museum during the year before and the year after it was refurbished.The charts show the result of surveys asking visitors how satisfied they were with their visit,during the samw two periods.

The table below shows the numbers of visitors to Ashdown Museum during the year before and the year after it was refurbished.The charts show the result of surveys asking visitors how satisfied they were with their visit,during the samw two periods.
The table depicts how many
tourists
visited
Ashdown
Museum
before and after the
year
of
renovation
.The charts illustrate the outcome of questionnaires asking
tourists
about their satisfaction,during their visit to the
museum
,in the same years.
Overall
,It is explicit that the number of visitors ,and their satisfaction both increased after the refurbishment of the
museum
. In detail,92000 people visited the
Ashdown
Museum
the
year
after
renovation
as compared to 74000
tourists
who went to the
museum
the
year
before refurbishment. In the results of surveys,the thing which stands out from the scheme is that 40% of the individuals who went to the
museum
were dissatisfied before the
year
of the reconstruction as compared to the 40% of the visitors who were satisfied after the period of
renovation
of
Ashdown
museum
.30% of the
tourists
were satisfied with the facilities at the
museum
before refurbishment,and 35% people who went to the
museum
year
after restructuring were very satisfied with the amenities.The number of dissatisfied visitors decreased the
year
after the
renovation
.
However
,5% of the folks who visited
Ashdown
Museum
did not give any answer,in the same period.
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