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The bar chart shows the monthly spending in dollars of a family in the USA on three items in 2010. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The bar chart shows the monthly spending in dollars of a family in the USA on three items in 2010. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The bar chart depicts the monthly spending in
dollars
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 of a family in the USA on three items
food
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,
gas
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 and clothing in 2010. the bar chart
also
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 includes a line to illustrate the average. It is clear from the graph that, the highest point in the average was recorded in March and the lowest point in April.
Overall
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, the
food
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 spending in January was over 400
dollars
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, and
that is
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 higher than the
gas
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 and clothing as they were below 400
dollars
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.
However
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. In February, spending on
food
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 and clothing had increased to over 400
dollars
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,
while
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gas
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 spending had decreased to under 400
dollars
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.
Nevertheless
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. The average shows a slight increase. In the month of March, the average climbed to up than 400
dollars
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, the clothing dropped to under 400
dollars
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, and the
food
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 spending decreased a little bit,
in addition
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 the
gas
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 spending increased by nearly 400
dollars
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.The outlay in April recorded the lowest average and the lowest
food
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 spending with the highest clothing and
gas
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 outlay.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 88%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words dollars, food, gas with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "decreased" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 3 times.
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