The diagram below shows the floor plan of a public library 20 years ago and how it looks now. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relevant.
The diagram below illustrates the floor view of the public library in the previous 2 decades and its visualization now.
Overall
, the major changes happen in a room
relocation by book categorize
. Replace the word
categorisation
Moreover
, the public library has new public places like cafe
, lecture Fix the agreement mistake
cafes
room
, and storytelling events.
The Fix the agreement mistake
rooms
detail
looks of the map Replace the word
detailed
gives
information that Correct subject-verb agreement
give
in
Change preposition
apply
the
20 years ago, the central library Correct article usage
apply
has
tables and chairs in the middle of the building and not for now, so that the place looks more spacious. Wrong verb form
had
In
the right side of the Change preposition
On
entrace
door was Correct your spelling
entrance
enquiry
desk that helped the visitors to get tickets or return books. Today, we can use those services with machines. Correct article usage
an enquiry
Consequently
, the enquiry space is replaced by the cafe. On the other side, we can see the computer room
that used to be a reading room
before.
On the left corner of the construction, it was an area that
we could find CDs, videos, or computer games, but at Correct word choice
where
this
time it use
as Wrong verb form
was used
Correct article usage
a books
books
place for children's fiction and storytelling events which Fix the agreement mistake
book
has
two sofas for the viewers. Wrong verb form
had
Additionally
, there is a lecture room
which was a book area for kids. At the
present, adult fiction books can be found near to information desk in front of the lecture chamber.Correct article usage
apply
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