The graph below shows the information about medical care in three European countries between 1960 and 2000
The line graph illustrates the amount of money spent on five different
type
of consumer goods in Europe from 1960 to 2000.
Change to a plural noun
types
Overall
, all categorie's
expenses Correct your spelling
categories's
were
experienced a downward trend except clothing during the given period of time.
In 1960, the highest amount of money Unnecessary verb
apply
spent
on food and it was around 34%. Add a missing verb
was spent
Then
, this
figure gradually dropped during the next 40 years,
and hit Remove the comma
apply
the
lowest Change the word
its
to
about 14%. Change preposition
at
Also
, leisure was the second highest money spender and it was
declined to around 11% in 2000. Unnecessary verb
apply
In
the beginning of the period, both transport and fuel/energy spent around 10% and 5% respectively. Change the preposition
At
However
, both figures were plummeted to its lowest rate in 2000, approximately 5% and 3% respectively.
In 1960, cloths
Correct your spelling
clothes
expend
about 9% and Wrong verb form
expended
then
showed the most notable development with a steady growth entire
given time period and reported a peak percentage in 2000, about 15%.Correct article usage
the entire
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