Fresh water has always been a limited resource in some parts of the world. Today, however, growing worldwide demand has made this a global problem. What are the causes of the increased demand, what measurements can governments and individuals take to respong to this problem?
In many parts of the
world
, there has always been a limit to fresh water
. Nowadays, because of the rising demand for this
resource, it has become a worldwide issue. Why has the demand recently increased? Because of the rising trend of population, through the world
and especially in the regions, where water
is less. World
governments need to solve this
problem and to do this
they must help countries which don't have technology
to make Add an article
the technology
water
for citizens.
The main problem is that the dependence on water
has recently risen. But why is that? Because the population becomes more and more every day and all of them necessary a source of life. For example
, Africa has the biggest percentage of growing citizens and this
continent is the poorest in the entire world
. They don't have enough complete technologies to solve this
problem. On the other hand
is the result of the wrong decisions of individuals about wasting water
. For instance
, the USSR and their heads made wrong measurements about the two rivers, that went to the Aral Sea. It was an important source for all regions, but they decided to spend it on planting vegetables and food for the country and exporting.
These reasons cause many uncomfortable results in the future. And to solve this
, in my opinion, heads of developed areas need to help countries of the second world
with
making Change preposition
by
water
for people. UN can make it rule and the world
will be
fewer suffering people. The second is that demographic rules. We mustn't change the areas because of income or exports. And the Verb problem
have
last
is individuals, such
as, bloggers like Mr Beast are helping African people with and they have own fresh water
. All famous humans can donate and build machines for making drinking water
.
In conclusion, I prefer to say that all countries must help each other and not play with the planet and change the maps and sources of water
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task response
Try to provide a more detailed analysis of both the causes of increased water demand and the solutions you propose. This will help you develop a complete response.
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task response
The use of examples, such as the situation in Africa and historical references to the Aral Sea, provides specificity and relevance to the argument.
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