Fresh water has always been a limited resource in some parts of the world. Today, however, growing worldwide demand has made this a global problem. What are the causes of the increased demand, what measurements can governments and individuals take to respong to this problem?

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In many parts of the
world
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, there has always been a limit to fresh
water
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. Nowadays, because of the rising demand for
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resource, it has become a worldwide issue. Why has the demand recently increased? Because of the rising trend of population, through the
world
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and especially in the regions, where
water
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is less.
World
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governments need to solve
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problem and to do
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they must help countries which don't have
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to make
water
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for citizens. The main problem is that the dependence on
water
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has recently risen. But why is that? Because the population becomes more and more every day and all of them necessary a source of life.
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, Africa has the biggest percentage of growing citizens and
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continent is the poorest in the entire
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. They don't have enough complete technologies to solve
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problem.
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is the result of the wrong decisions of individuals about wasting
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.
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, the USSR and their heads made wrong measurements about the two rivers, that went to the Aral Sea. It was an important source for all regions, but they decided to spend it on planting vegetables and food for the country and exporting. These reasons cause many uncomfortable results in the future. And to solve
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, in my opinion, heads of developed areas need to help countries of the second
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making
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for people. UN can make it rule and the
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fewer suffering people. The second is that demographic rules. We mustn't change the areas because of income or exports. And the
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is individuals,
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as, bloggers like Mr Beast are helping African people with and they have own fresh
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. All famous humans can donate and build machines for making drinking
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. In conclusion, I prefer to say that all countries must help each other and not play with the planet and change the maps and sources of
water
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Try to provide a more detailed analysis of both the causes of increased water demand and the solutions you propose. This will help you develop a complete response.
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The use of examples, such as the situation in Africa and historical references to the Aral Sea, provides specificity and relevance to the argument.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • limited resource
  • global problem
  • population growth
  • industrial expansion
  • agricultural activities
  • urbanization
  • water conservation policies
  • water-saving technologies
  • infrastructure
  • wastewater treatment
  • recycling
  • public awareness campaigns
  • water conservation
  • mindful use
  • domestic use
  • sanitation
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