The bar chart gives infornamtion about the number of car journeys into the city centre made by residents and non-residents.
The bar chart illustrates
average
number of Add an article
the average
car
rides
per day by residents
and non-residents
into the town hall from 1996-2005.
Overall
, the highest amount of rides
made by residents
before introduced
parking meters to the city Wrong verb form
introducing
center
. After that, non-Change the spelling
centre
residents
's car
journeys became popular until closed traffics
in two lanes. Correct subject-verb agreement
traffic
However
, town hall visits of both groups were reduced notably after Correct article usage
the indroduced
indroduced
parking meters and traffic changes.
In 1996, Correct your spelling
introduced
introduce
residents
were made up just
below 10000 Change preposition
of just
car
rides
as
the highest amount Change preposition
apply
through out
the period. Correct your spelling
throughout
Then
it showed a downward trend with some fluctuations until end
of the period. Correct article usage
the end
Additionally
, first 4 years this
figure fluctuated in
between 9000-10000 and after 1999 drastically dropped by almost half with parking meters. Change preposition
apply
Also
, number
of daily Change the article
a number
the number
rides
maintained
under 5000 until 2005.
In terms of Verb problem
remained
non-resident
, their Fix the agreement mistake
non-residents
car
rides
almost half of the residents
rides
in 1996 and the figure started to rise to about 8000 in 1999. Wrong verb form
rode
Its
remained constant Correct pronoun usage
It
the
next 3 years with Change preposition
for the
parking
meter. Add an article
a parking
the parking
Furthermore
, once introduced traffic conditions, plummeted to around 3000 rides
. Then
until 2005, non-
Fix the agreement mistake
non-resident
residents
travels
became less than 5000.Change the verb form
travel
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