The diagram below shows the process of producing smoked fish
The diagram illustrates how to produce smoked
fish
start
from catching until selling it in Wrong verb form
starting
market
.
Correct article usage
the market
Overall
, there are 13 stages need
to be done before the smoked Correct pronoun usage
that need
fish
could
be sold.
In the first stage, Wrong verb form
can
it is clear that
the fish
has to be caught from the sea before it will bring
to the port. Afterwards, the Wrong verb form
be brought
fish
need to be stay
frozen during the trip. The next following step is Change the verb form
stay
thaw
the Fix the infinitive
to thaw
fish
before putting the fish
into the fresh water. Next,
the fish
need to be clean
up by Replace the word
cleaned
cut
and Replace the word
cutting
open
.
The Replace the word
opening
ingridients
that consist of salt water and yellow colouring will be the next step for the Correct your spelling
ingredients
fish
. After that, the fish
need to be smoke
before it will get Wrong verb form
smoked
freeze
again Wrong verb form
frozen
with
0 Change preposition
at
celcius
degree Correct your spelling
celsius
then
store
Wrong verb form
stored
it
Correct pronoun usage
apply
into
cold storage to maintain the temperature. The Change preposition
in
last
step before it sells in the shopping market is distrubution
.Correct your spelling
distribution
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Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words fish with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: Only 3 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
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