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The chart and graph give information about sales and share prices for Coca-Cola. Write a report for a university lectuer describing the information shown below.

The chart and graph give information about sales and share prices for Coca-Cola. Write a report for a university lectuer describing the information shown below.
#information #sales #prices #coca-cola #report #university #lectuer
The pie chart and graph illustrate information about
sales
 of
Coco Cola
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Coco-Cola
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 in different regions and
share
prices
 for
Coco-Cola
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Coca-Cola
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 from 1996 to 2001, respectively.
Overall
,
Coco-Cola
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Coca-Cola
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 has the highest number of
cosumers
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customers
 in North
Amercia
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America
 and the least is in Africa and
Middle
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the Middle
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 East region. Many
fluctuation
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 can be noticed in the
share
prices
 over the time period.
Firstly
, the highest number of
consumer
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consumers
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 of the company belongs to North America, it shares 30.4% of total
sales
 and it is followed by Latin
Amercia
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America
, which accounts
25.7
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% of total
sales
. The region with
third
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 largest consumer is
Euroupe
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Europe
 which holds 20% of
sales
 and the
last
 two regions are Asia, Africa and
Middle
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the Middle
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 East which contribute 15.4% and 7% to the
sales
, respectively.
Secondly
, the
share
prices
 were around 35
in
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at
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 the
starting
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 of the period.
Share
prices
 of the
comapny
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company
 tend to upsurge till 1997 to around 70$.
Then
 a slight decrease in the pricing
recorded
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 in the
mid
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middle
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 of the
year
 1997 and which is followed by a hike in
year
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the year
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 1998 at around 80$.
Then
 the
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price of
price
pricof
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price of
 the
share
is
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plummeted to below 50 in the
year
 2000 and the rate
tend
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tended
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 to grow
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at around
around
ataround
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at around
 55$ till the end of
year
 2001
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 75%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words sales, share, prices, year with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 3 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • depict
  • illustrate
  • highlight
  • fluctuations
  • correlation
  • trends
  • overview
  • analysis
  • interpretation
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