The chart and graph give information about sales and share prices for Coca-Cola. Write a report for a university lectuer describing the information shown below.

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The pie chart and graph illustrate information about

sales

Coco Cola

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Coco-Cola

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in different regions and

prices

for

Coco-Cola

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Coca-Cola

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from 1996 to 2001, respectively.

Overall

Coco-Cola

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Coca-Cola

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has the highest number of

cosumers

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customers

in North

Amercia

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America

and the least is in Africa and

Middle

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the Middle

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East region. Many

fluctuation

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fluctuations

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can be noticed in the

prices

over the time period.

Firstly

, the highest number of

consumer

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consumers

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of the company belongs to North America, it shares 30.4% of total

sales

and it is followed by Latin

Amercia

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America

, which accounts

25.7

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for 25.7

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% of total

sales

. The region with

third

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the third

a third

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largest consumer is

Euroupe

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Europe

which holds 20% of

sales

and the

last

two regions are Asia, Africa and

Middle

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the Middle

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East which contribute 15.4% and 7% to the

sales

, respectively.

Secondly

, the

prices

were around 35

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the

starting

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start

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of the period.

prices

of the

comapny

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company

tend to upsurge till 1997 to around 70$.

Then

a slight decrease in the pricing

recorded

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was recorded

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in the

mid

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middle

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of the

year

1997 and which is followed by a hike in

year

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the year

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1998 at around 80$.

Then

the

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price of

price

pricof

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price of

the

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apply

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plummeted to below 50 in the

year

2000 and the rate

tend

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tended

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to grow

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at around

around

ataround

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at around

55$ till the end of

year

2001

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5Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
4Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
25Grammar mistakes
 

4 paragraphs

206 words

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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