The graph belows shows the average daily sales of selected food items at the Brisk Cafe, by seasons.

The graph belows shows the average daily sales of selected food items at the Brisk Cafe, by seasons.
The given bar chart illustrates the
comparation
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comparison
of food
items
that have been sold
everyday
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at Brisk Cafe in
Winter
and Summer. The units were measured in number of servings and the
items
divided
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were divided
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into five types, hot
coffee
, iced
coffee
,
ice
cream,
soup
and
salad
.
Overall
, it can be clearly seen that hot
coffee
and
soup
was
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had
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the highest
sales
in
Winter
,
whereas
in Summer all of the
items
were relatively sold more than 25
items
. In terms of the
sales
during the
Winter
season, the highest
avarage
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average
sales
was hot
coffee
at 75. The second place was followed by
soup
at
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avarage
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average
50
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of 50
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pieces.
Moreover
,
ice
cream and
salad
have been sold almost in the same
amout
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amount
, around 24
items
. Meanwhile, iced
coffee
was
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had
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the lowest
sales
at nearly average at 2
items
. Regarding the
item
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items
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that
sold
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were sold
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in the Summer, the average of all food
items
were
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was
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below 40. The highest figure was
ice
coffee
at exactly 40 and experienced the
higest
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highest
gap compared with
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the winter
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winter
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the winter
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season.
Ice
cream was followed in
the
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second place at around 35,
10
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a 10
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higher number than
sales
in
winter
. The
sales
of hot
coffee
was
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were
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at
pricesely
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precisely
30 pieces.
Lastly
,
soup
and
salad
have
excatly
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exactly
the same amount at 25 and
salad
was sold in the same figure in both seasons.
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Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Vocabulary: Replace the words items, winter, coffee, ice, soup, salad, sales with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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