The chart below shows the number of households in the US by their annual income in 2017, 2011 and 2015. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below shows the number of households in the US by their annual income in 2017, 2011 and 2015.

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar chart
illustrate
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how much annual revenue American
families
earned over a period of 8 years.
Overall
, it is evident that with the exception of one year, most people earned the highest yearly income.
However
, during the entire period, the smallest
number
of
families
were paid the second highest salaries. In both the years 2007 and 2015, the largest
number
of Americans earned 100000 dollars or more as the corresponding figures were approximately 30 and 37 million, respectively.
However
, in 2011, the
number
of
families
with
this
amount of income was lower than that of people with less than 25000 to 49999 and it stood at nearly 27 million.
On the other hand
, the figure for 50000-74999 dollars remained almost constant at just over 25
millions
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million
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of
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people. It is worth noting that that the
number
of
families
with the second highest revenue in a year, was the smallest in each year, and it fluctuated around 14 million.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words families, number with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "figures" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 4 times.

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  • annual income
  • households
  • income distribution
  • peak
  • rise
  • fall
  • stable
  • significant
  • trend
  • fluctuation
  • economic conditions
  • policy changes
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