The two maps below show and island, before and after the construction of some tourist facilities.

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The two maps illustrate the main changes which have taken place on an

island

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after the construction of several tourist facilities. What stands out from the maps is that the

island

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has many accommodations and some tourist attractions.

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with, around 15 bungalows have been built covering almost half of the

island

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which are

also

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equipped with pedestrian which connects each of them.

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, a receptionist is located in the middle of them and surrounded by a vehicle pathway which links directly to a restaurant and a pier. The restaurant sits on the north side of the receptionist facing the sea.

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, on the west side of the

island

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, the beach has become a safe swimming area which can be accessed immediately by the visitors who stay in the west bungalows. The pier on the south side of the

island

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offers yacht cruise attractions which will escort the tourists for

island

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hopping and snorkeling to the nearby islands.

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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 70%.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words island with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: The word "maps" was used 2 times.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 7.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

3 paragraphs

160 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

island
before and after
construction
tourist facilities
maps
changes
comparison
description
implications
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