The two maps below show and island, before and after the construction of some tourist facilities.

The two maps below show and island, before and after the construction of some tourist facilities.
The two maps illustrate the main changes which have taken place on an
island
after the construction of several tourist facilities. What stands out from the maps is that the
island
has many accommodations and some tourist attractions.
To begin
with, around 15 bungalows have been built covering almost half of the
island
which are
also
equipped with pedestrian which connects each of them.
In addition
, a receptionist is located in the middle of them and surrounded by a vehicle pathway which links directly to a restaurant and a pier. The restaurant sits on the north side of the receptionist facing the sea.
Then
, on the west side of the
island
, the beach has become a safe swimming area which can be accessed immediately by the visitors who stay in the west bungalows. The pier on the south side of the
island
offers yacht cruise attractions which will escort the tourists for
island
hopping and snorkeling to the nearby islands.
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  • island
  • before and after
  • construction
  • tourist facilities
  • maps
  • changes
  • comparison
  • description
  • implications
  • personal opinion
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