The tables give information about the temperatures and hours of daylight in London and Sydney during the same weekend in December 2018.
The tables give information on the air temperatures and daytime in the UK and Australia from Friday 28th to Sunday 30th of December 2018. It is clearly seen that the average climate in
Sydney
is warm and the daylight is much longer as compared with London
.
In detail, the peak temperature in Sydney
reached at
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degrees
on Sunday 30th while
the highest temperature in London
only has 13 degrees
on Saturday 29th. Moreover
, it can seen that the climate degree in London
varied considerably from the lowest 3°C to the highest 13°C, with a gap of 10 degree
. Change to a plural noun
degrees
Furthermore
, the temperature of Sydney
in
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apply
this
weekend only have
slightly Verb problem
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climb
from Change the verb form
climbed
minimizing
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apply
degrees
to maxing
31 Verb problem
apply
degrees
, with in
5 Correct your spelling
within
degrees
.
To sum up
, the period of daylight in Sydney
is reached
around 15 hours Verb problem
apply
in contrast
to London
much short
only Replace the word
shorter
has
around 8 hours per day.Unnecessary verb
apply
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