Nowadays, there are a number of
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and decide to travel. I think their attraction
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of the financial issues they face, gaining skills and
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is bringing refreshment to their mind.
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the reason is lack of money. There are so many students who cannot afford the
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and I used to save them for my
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things had been very tight at that time for my family, I just wanted to assist them by providing them with some money.
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helps people to
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new environment and that helps to enhance our skills that ensure our good career.
, when we travel, we feel very good and refreshed inside. A fresh mind and good health aids to do anything in a proper manner.
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with their friends or in nature before the new
so that they can be ready to handle the pressure of
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Anyways, when we think about the negative influence of
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practices, it really
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tension.
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and that can be a disadvantage for the students. If they
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with other
later on.
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to catch up with the lectures and all.
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in consequences.