The two maps below show road access to a city hospital in 2007 and in 2010.
The two maps illustrate the improvements in road access to a city hospital over the period of 3 years between 2007 and 2010.
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, the facilities of the hospital were modernized and new premises were constructed.
It can be seen that the city hospital was located in the north and the main road passed from the west to the east, which was connected to the hospital and bypassed from all sides in 2007. On the southeast side of the hospital, a car park was located for the public and staff and bus stops were built near Linking Words
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, new facilities were built and old ones were reconstructed in 2010. Bus stops were demolished and a new bus station was built to replace them. Linking Words
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, roundabouts were introduced to the hospital road and were built from both sides. On the west side of the hospital, a car park was constructed for the public.Linking Words
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