The graph below shows the number of tourists visiting a particular Caribbean island between 2010 and 2017 Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features,and make comparisons where relevant.
The line graph provides information about how many
travelers
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travellers
visit
a specific Wrong verb form
visited
caribbean
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Caribbean
island
whether they stay on Use synonyms
cruise
ship or on Add an article
a cruise
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island
from 2010 to 2017. Correct article usage
an island
Overall
, it is evident that the total of Linking Words
people
who came to the Use synonyms
island
constantly increased from time to Use synonyms
tim
. Correct your spelling
time
Tim
People
who stayed on Use synonyms
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island
had more Add an article
the island
people
than on Use synonyms
Correct article usage
the yacht
yacht
before in the next seven years the number of guests Fix the agreement mistake
yachts
chose
cruise ships Correct pronoun usage
who chose
outperform
the Wrong verb form
outperformed
amount
of guests who Change the quantifier
number
live
on Wrong verb form
lived
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island
.
Looking at the details, in 2010, visitors who Add an article
the island
an island
stay
on vessels and on Wrong verb form
stayed
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island
started at 0,25 Add an article
the island
Use synonyms
millions
and 0,75 Change to singular
million
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millions
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million
people
, respectively. Increasing Use synonyms
about
0,25 Change preposition
by about
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millions
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million
people
in the year Use synonyms
of
2011, the gap between tourists who rest on Change preposition
apply
beach
and boats was merely 0,25 Fix the agreement mistake
beaches
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millions
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million
people
. Over 5 years, the number of Use synonyms
people
who had Use synonyms
vacation
on Wrong verb form
vacationed
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island
grew twice from before and remained at 1,5 Add an article
the island
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millions
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million
people
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while
the sum of visitants who stayed on cruise ships Linking Words
had
fluctuated and reached 1,25 Unnecessary verb
apply
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millions
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million
people
.
Between 2015 and 2016, both categories had Use synonyms
same
numbers before continuously increasing to 2 Correct article usage
the same
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millions
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million
people
for Use synonyms
people
who lived on vessels and 1,5 Use synonyms
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millions
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million
people
for Use synonyms
people
who stayed on Use synonyms
Use synonyms
island
.Add an article
the island
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Vocabulary: Replace the words island, people, millions with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "stay" was used 5 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
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