The graph below shows the number of tourists visiting a particular Caribbean island between 2010 and 2017 Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features,and make comparisons where relevant.
The line graph provides information about how many
travelers
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travellers
visit
a specific Wrong verb form
visited
caribbean
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Caribbean
island
whether they stay on cruise
ship or on Add an article
a cruise
island
from 2010 to 2017. Correct article usage
an island
Overall
, it is evident that the total of people
who came to the island
constantly increased from time to tim
. Correct your spelling
time
Tim
People
who stayed on island
had more Add an article
the island
people
than on Correct article usage
the yacht
yacht
before in the next seven years the number of guests Fix the agreement mistake
yachts
chose
cruise ships Correct pronoun usage
who chose
outperform
the Wrong verb form
outperformed
amount
of guests who Change the quantifier
number
live
on Wrong verb form
lived
island
.
Looking at the details, in 2010, visitors who Add an article
the island
an island
stay
on vessels and on Wrong verb form
stayed
island
started at 0,25 Add an article
the island
millions
and 0,75 Change to singular
million
millions
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million
people
, respectively. Increasing about
0,25 Change preposition
by about
millions
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million
people
in the year of
2011, the gap between tourists who rest on Change preposition
apply
beach
and boats was merely 0,25 Fix the agreement mistake
beaches
millions
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million
people
. Over 5 years, the number of people
who had vacation
on Wrong verb form
vacationed
island
grew twice from before and remained at 1,5 Add an article
the island
millions
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million
people
while
the sum of visitants who stayed on cruise ships had
fluctuated and reached 1,25 Unnecessary verb
apply
millions
Change to singular
million
people
.
Between 2015 and 2016, both categories had same
numbers before continuously increasing to 2 Correct article usage
the same
millions
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million
people
for people
who lived on vessels and 1,5 millions
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million
people
for people
who stayed on island
.Add an article
the island
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Vocabulary: Replace the words island, people, millions with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "stay" was used 5 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
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