Q= Having police officer patrolling the streets is often considered an essential way to reduce crime. How effective do you think police Street patrolling are? What other ways to reduce crime can you purpose?

Increasing

crime

is not only scaring people but

it

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also

a concerning issue for authorities,

therefore

, it is thought that

presence

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the presence

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of

police

might assist

to lessen

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crime

in

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on

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the streets. I believe that officer patrolling can be effective in

this

matter and I

also

mention some more ways to tackle

this

obstacle in the upcoming paragraphs. To commence with,

visibility

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the visibility

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of

police

officers

can deter potential criminals from committing crimes

due to

the fear of immediate apprehension.

In other words

, criminals would think twice to hurt people if every street is monitored by

officers

.

For instance

, 60%

crime

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of crime

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would be reduced if

this

initiative action is taken by

police

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the police

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department as

officers

do not have to drive

for

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to

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crime

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a crime

the crime

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scene, they could directly

caught

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catch

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the thief on the spot,

hence

,

criminal

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criminals

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would

also

avoid doing that

due to

the fear of

police

.

Consequently

, there are higher chances of mitigating the

crime

. Considering towards other ways of dragging down

crime

are putting some cameras on the streets and

involvement

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the involvement

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of the government.

Firstly

, security cameras should be installed on all streets as if some people try to do something illegal

then

they can be monitored by them and

police

can get some proof with the help of these security services and arrest those

wrong doing

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wrongdoing

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individuals.

Secondly

,

this

issue

also

requires the intervention of

government

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the government

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as it can implement some strict measures to reduce

crime

and,

consequently

, it might create fear among those who involve themselves in these activities. In conclusion,

although

police

officers

can

assist

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public

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the public

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from criminals

by

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through

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their presence

but

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apply

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other initiatives

such

as implementing camera laws can

also

help to protect societies and

police

departments in

the

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sophisticated

situation

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situations

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to get proof towards offenders.

Also

, the government's involvement can

also

lessen

this

problem.