The graph below gives information about the percentage of the population in four Asian countries living in cities from 1970 to 2020, with predictions for 2030 and 2040. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below gives information about the percentage of the population in  four Asian countries living in cities from 1970 to 2020, with predictions for 2030 and 2040. 

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The given graph provides clear data concerning the
population
of several Asian countries between 1970 and 2020
along with
projections for the other two decades.
Overall
, the
rate
of
population
in all given areas saw a gradual increase over the course of a given period and
this
trend is expected to be continued till 2040. In terms of Malaysia and Indonesia, they started with around 30% and 12%, respectively. By 1990 onward, these two countries saw a considerable increase in terms of the percentage
rate
of
population
and it's expected that
this
trend will continue until 2040 (around 85% and 62 %, relatively). With regards to the
Philippines
and Thailand, the
population
rate
of the
Philippines
in 1970 was quite more than 30 %,
whereas
Thailand's was around half the
rate
of the
Philippines
in the same year. After seeing fluctuations in the
rate
till 2020, the
population
in the
Philippines
,
according to
projections, will rise steadily and end the year with notably more than 50 %.
However
, Thailand's
population
rate
will increase considerably from 2020 onward, reaching roughly 50 % in 2040.
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