The chart below show the number of magazines sold per person in five countries in 2003 and 2005, with projected sales for 2007. Summarize the information by describing the main features of the charts and making comparisons where appropriate.

The chart below show the number of magazines sold per person in five countries in 2003 and 2005, with projected sales for 2007.

Summarize the information by describing the main features of the charts and making comparisons where appropriate.
The bar graph depicts the amount of magazines traded per person in five different countries in 2003 and 2005 and projected trade for 2007.
Overall
, except
country
D all the nations decrease their sale of brochures in a time period. And nation B somehow managed their sale in 2003 and 2007.
To begin
with,
country
A had a sale of 48
journals
in 2003 followed by 45 per person in 2005 and expected 38 per individual in 2007. Where
country
B sold 50 and 48 publications per customer in the years 2003 and 2005 respectively and the assumption in 2007 was 45
journals
per customer. The same trend follows for
country
C the graph dropping from 38 in 2003 to 35 magazines in 2005 followed by 32 per person in 2007.
Secondly
, for
country
D the indicators are increasing from 18 publications in 2003 to 20 in 2005 and 22
journals
per individual are expected in 2007.
On the other hand
country
E in 2003 and 2007 acquired the same position with 5 publications per human and the indicator picked the hike in 2005 with 7 per human who bought
journals
.
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