The table below shows the numbers of visitors to Ashdown Museum during the year before and the year after it was refurbished. The charts show the result of surveys asking visitors how satisfied they were with their visit, during the same two periods. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The table depicts the number of visitors to Ashdown Museum,

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the two pie charts illustrate the satisfaction of tourists to Ashdown Museum during the previous years and the next

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after

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. By and large, the

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after

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, got a higher rate of very satisfied visitors compared to the previous

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.

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with, there were 74,000 people who visited the museum during the previous

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number rose significantly after the

refurbishment

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to 92,000 visitors. Moving on to the visitor's satisfaction survey,

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the greatest percentage of respondents’ experiences in the

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prior to the

refurbishment

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, at 40%.

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number has declined up to one in fifteen following the

refurbishment

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. The percentages of very satisfied and satisfied

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the most common respondents. in comparison

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both rose rising up during the years after the

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thirty five

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