Some people believe that children should be banned from using their phones during the school day. Others believe that children should be allowed to use their phones. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Few people argue that phone usage at school should be restricted

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some others believe that

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should be allowed to utilize their mobile

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. Personally, I completely agree with the first statement because bringing

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to schools can affect the children's concentration and social interaction. On the one hand,

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can be extremely useful, especially in today's climate where the internet has become an unavoidable part of our daily life. Young pupils can

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their handphones to find study materials that are not available in the textbooks.

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is going to be beneficial for both the teachers and

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because the internet encompasses diverse subjects that will add more knowledge for its users.

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, back

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when I was in high school, we had to learn about the history of movie theaters and arts. Truthfully, it was quite hard to find the topics in physical books.

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, the teachers permitted us to

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gadgets and there were an abundance of magazines and articles that were very helpful for our homework.

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, it is very understandable why many people support banning

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as they can affect concentration and social life.

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,

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can really affect young children's attention as many of them

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for the wrong purposes like playing games, whether during break time or even in the classroom when they supposedly need to pay full attention to the lecturers.

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, games are very addicting and it tends to be very difficult to stop playing them.

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, they will waste their time playing games rather than talking to their schoolmates.

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proven by the recent report from Del Primary Academy that shows about 68% of its

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no longer like to do physical activities with their friends and prefer to

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social media at rest time.

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, even though

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can be helpful

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more knowledge, the possible drawbacks are worse as they can disturb

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' concentration and social roles.

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why I agree to ban

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from schools.