The chart below shows changes in three different areas of crime in manchester city centre from 2003 to 2012.

The chart below shows changes in three different areas of crime in manchester city centre from 2003 to 2012.
The line graph illustrates the changed
number
of
crime
cases
between 2003 and 2012.
This
data consists of three different areas of
crime
in Manchester city centre. From the graph, burglary, car theft and robbery are mentioned.
Overall
, burglary had the highest
crime
rates in the beginner year.
However
, after 9 years it had a considerable fall in their rating.
Furthermore
, car theft has gained more
cases
over the years. The summary charts will be given below In the area of Bulgary crimes, the
cases
of
crime
decreased from 2005 to 2008.
While
, in 2009, the
number
of crimes increased by around 500
cases
.
At the end
of the period,
this
area becomes more stable with the amount of
cases
.
Moreover
, reduce a little bit of the
number
.Car theft
crime
has fluctuated, beginning from 2003 to the end of 2009 with above 2.000 and under 2.500. The numbers changed around 1.000
cases
between 2009 and 2012.
Although
less a
number
of robberies than in any of the other crimes throughout the period, its
crime
levels were fairly stable, hovering around 500
cases
mark the time.
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