The chart below shows changes in three different areas of crime in manchester city centre from 2003 to 2012.
The line graph illustrates the changed
number
of Use synonyms
crime
Use synonyms
cases
between 2003 and 2012. Use synonyms
This
data consists of three different areas of Linking Words
crime
in Manchester city centre. From the graph, burglary, car theft and robbery are mentioned. Use synonyms
Overall
, burglary had the highest Linking Words
crime
rates in the beginner year. Use synonyms
However
, after 9 years it had a considerable fall in their rating.Linking Words
Furthermore
, car theft has gained more Linking Words
cases
over the years. The summary charts will be given below
In the area of Bulgary crimes, the Use synonyms
cases
of Use synonyms
crime
decreased from 2005 to 2008. Use synonyms
While
, in 2009, the Linking Words
number
of crimes increased by around 500 Use synonyms
cases
. Use synonyms
At the end
of the period, Linking Words
this
area becomes more stable with the amount of Linking Words
cases
. Use synonyms
Moreover
, reduce a little bit of the Linking Words
number
.Car theft Use synonyms
crime
has fluctuated, beginning from 2003 to the end of 2009 with above 2.000 and under 2.500. The numbers changed around 1.000 Use synonyms
cases
between 2009 and 2012.Use synonyms
Although
less a Linking Words
number
of robberies than in any of the other crimes
throughout the period, its Use synonyms
crime
levels were fairly stable, hovering around 500 Use synonyms
cases
mark the time.Use synonyms
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