some people say that it is possible to tell a lot about a person's character and culture from their choice of clothes. Do you agree or disagree?
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this
day and age, Internationalisation has changed Linking Words
people
's lifestyle, Use synonyms
preference
and selection of attires to a greater extent. Many Fix the agreement mistake
preferences
people
believe that dressing sense denotes Use synonyms
about
their character, values and tradition widely. I completely disagree with Change preposition
apply
this
concept and think that Linking Words
way
of dressing does not define a person's nature and Correct article usage
the way
their
morals. Correct pronoun usage
apply
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essay will Linking Words
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elaborate Linking Words
it
in Change preposition
on it
supporting
paragraph.
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a supporting
To begin
with, Linking Words
majority
of Correct article usage
the majority
people
tend to Use synonyms
dress
up Use synonyms
according to
their desire, Linking Words
ongoing
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or ongoing
trend
or they get inspired by the influencers. Fix the agreement mistake
trends
People
strive to express themselves via certain dressing and
dressing well Use synonyms
also
makes them feel more pleasant, relaxed and confident at the same time. It is undoubtedly unfair to have judgement about someone just because Linking Words
how
they choose to wear or look. Change preposition
of how
For instance
, most asians work for renowned clothing Linking Words
corporation
and they are more likely to wear trendy fashionable outfits, but that doesn't mean they lack Fix the agreement mistake
corporations
morals
and Correct article usage
the morals
culture
of their society, it is somehow Use synonyms
way
of promoting the company's brand. Add an article
a way
Hence
, someone's way of dressing or certain Linking Words
dress
code never Use synonyms
substantiate
their character and beliefs.
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substantiates
Moreover
, dressing code often represents Linking Words
people
's cultural Use synonyms
difference
, customs and traditions, creating Fix the agreement mistake
differences
a
respect towards their Remove the article
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origin
and ancestors. Numerous ethnic groups still wear their traditional Fix the agreement mistake
origins
dress
as it not only Use synonyms
preserve
their Correct subject-verb agreement
preserves
culture
but Use synonyms
also
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promote
it widely. Change the verb form
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For example
, Linking Words
muslim
ladies tend to wear their Change the capitalization
Muslim
dress
called hijab all their life to abide by the norms, values and Use synonyms
culture
as it Use synonyms
also
makes them more demure and submissive than most Linking Words
of
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apply
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people
living in Add an article
the people
this
contemporary society and it doesn't mean they are repressive or else, it rather shows their respect and beliefs towards their Linking Words
culture
. Use synonyms
Hence
, Linking Words
people
wear different sorts of Use synonyms
dress
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according to
their Linking Words
culture
and norms and we should not be judging anyone because of how they look or what they wear.
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To conclude
, Linking Words
no-one
should critique a person because of their appearance as it is the Correct your spelling
no one
most harsh
thing to do in mankind and we should encourage Change the adjective
harshest
people
to wear whatever they want to wear and not Use synonyms
to
evaluate their character individually. So, I totally disagree with the opposite thought and support the idea mentioned above.Fix the infinitive
apply
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