The chart below shows the number of households in the US by their annual income in 2007, 2011 and 2015. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The Bar Chart Illustrates the amount of US
household
by their yearly income for 3 Fix the agreement mistake
households
year
in 2007, 2011 and 2015. The data accounted Change to a plural noun
years
in
millions Change preposition
for
number
. Overall
, it can be seen that the number
varied along the periods, with the constant significant amount of residence by people who have income at less than $25.000, $25.000 to $49.000 and $100.000 or more.
At the beginning of the periods
, the Fix the agreement mistake
period
number
on
US majority Change preposition
of
household
by population who have $100.000 yearly intake accounted Fix the agreement mistake
households
at
nearly 30 Change preposition
for
point
, Change to a plural noun
points
Thus
followed by $25.000 to $49.000 groups at around 27 points, then
less than $25.000 at 25. The other categories of income have a small amount with less than 22. The middle periods
Fix the agreement mistake
period
at
2011 Change preposition
in
shows
a similar Correct subject-verb agreement
show
number
of residence
owning, there Replace the word
residents
are
Change the verb form
is
slighlty
increase Correct your spelling
slightly
slight
for
$25.000 Change preposition
from
until
$49.000 and less than $25.000 groups around 5 points.
Change preposition
to
At
2015, it was the peak session for the people of $100.000 or more intake categories, Change preposition
In
that
Correct pronoun usage
which
leads
to nearly 34 points. The other categories spot stagnant movement at house owning for US populations.Wrong verb form
led
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Vocabulary: The word "nearly" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
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