Some people believe that professionals, such as doctors and engineers, should be required to work in the country where they did their training. Others believe they should be free to work in another country if they wish. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
It is believed that for some
profession
, like engineers or doctors, it should be mandatory to get a job in the Fix the agreement mistake
professions
country
where they studied, while
others think that these people
should be allowed to choose where they want to work
. This
essay agrees people
should have the freedom to choose to work
in another country
. It is true that working in the country
where they did their training would ensure that they have the specific competencies needed. However
, the level of education in all countries
are
not the same, and, for that Correct subject-verb agreement
is
reason
it is necessary to allow Add a comma
reason,
people
to study
in a more advanced country
and working
in another.
Some Wrong verb form
work
countries
have specific problems that they have to face. For example
, there are diseases that are specific to only certain parts of the world, like malaria that only shows in tropical countries
. It is important for the medical professionals that is
going to handle people
with malaria to understand and to
be able to treat the disease. If they studied in a different Fix the infinitive
apply
country
with a different set of specific health issues, they might not be equipped with the necessary knowledge to be able to treat people
in the place where they decided to work
.
However
, it is important to remember that some people
study
in a different country
to get a better education. It is a fact that some countries
are more advanced than others in certain fields, and to be able to learn in that country
would be an immense help to the growth of these aspiring professionals. After finishing their studies, they would be able to go back home and contribute to the advancement of their field of work
in their country
. Some nations have specific scholarship programs that encourages
Change the verb form
encourage
people
to study
in a different country
and then
go back home, take the LPDP program in Indonesia as an example. In that program, you are given a scholarship for study
and also
enough money to cover the living costs while
you study
, with the requirement that you go back to work
in Indonesia.
In conclusion, even though there are benefits to working in your country
of study
, not all countries
have the education system and institution
in place to support their Fix the agreement mistake
institutions
people
to work
and study
in their own country
. And for
the reason stated, Correct word choice
For
this
essay believes that people
should be allowed to work
in a different country
with
where they studied.Change preposition
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