The graph below shows the number of tourists visiting a particular caribbean island between 2010 and 2017 Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparions where relevant
The graph illustrates the number of travellers abroad when having a vacation on Caribbean
Island
from 2010 to 2017. There are two types of visitors, those who stay on cruise
ships and stay on the island
. Overall
, the total number of visitors is steadily increasing, although
there is a slight decrease in people who stay on the island
.
It is clear that
travellers staying on cruise
ships are gradually increasing. Started with around 5 million
people in 2010 and ended just at 2 million
. The numbers happened to fall back to the starting point in 2012 but were able to turn around and keep moving upward.
Meanwhile, visitors who stay on the island
fluctuate. At
the beginning, the numbers are one time more than those on the Change the preposition
In
cruise
with around 0.75 million
, but the ending goes down to be just at 1.5 million
, 0.5 million
less than on the cruise
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Vocabulary: Replace the words island, cruise, million with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "stay" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 3 times.
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