The diagram belows shows the floor plan of a public library 20 years
The maps give information about the changes in a public library during a twenty-year period of time.
Overall
, it can be seen that several book categories removed and there is a new café.
To begin
with, 20 years ago, there were tables and chairs in the centre of the library. On the west of the floor, third room
from the entrance door, there was a games area which contained CDs, videos, and computer games. It redeveloped into a computer room
at the left of the gate, where there was once a reading space. However
, all reference collections are in between the computer room
and children’s books.
Moreover
, it was relocated from southeast to southwest near a venue for storytelling events. The kid section was replaced by a lecture room
, and beside it, there are adult fiction books, an information desk, and three self-service machines. Finally
, the library has a café that
located to the right of the main door.Correct pronoun usage
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Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Vocabulary: Replace the words room with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "information" was used 2 times.
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