The chart below gives information about how families in one country spent their weekly income in 1968 and in 2018.
The given bar chart illustrates data about how family members in one nation spent their weekly revenue in 1968 and 2018 and
this
comparison includes eight categories.
As can seen in the chart, all kinds of family usage were changed except household goods
. In addition
, food , fuel and power, clothing and footwear and personal goods
experienced a downward trend between the given period and decreased from 35% to 17%, 8% to 4%, 10% to 5% and 9% to 4% respectively.
On the other hand
, People spent more weekly in some categories in 2017 in comparison with 1968. They allocated 18% of their budget into housing in 2017 which is 8% more than the beginning of the period. Also
spending weekly income on leisure grew significantly from 9% to approximately 23%.
In conclusion, the given graph demonstrates that people's consumption trend has changed over 50 years incredibly. Households spent more budget on housing, transport and leisure. Conversely
, they allocate less money to food,clothing and
footwear and personal Correct word choice
apply
goods
. Moreover
, the consumption of household goods
didn't change at all.Submitted by zahrahosseini1992 on
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