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The table and pie charts show the number of research students in Australia Universities in 2001 and 2010

The table and pie charts show the number of research students in Australia Universities in 2001 and 2010
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The data from the table provides information about international and local
research
students
 in many universities in Australia in 2001 and 2010. Meanwhile, the pie chart shows the proportion of
research
students
 by gender for each local and international
research
 student. In brief, there was a significant increase in total
research
students
 from 2001 and 2010.
Further
, the number of international
students
 rose dramatically for both females and males in a decade.
Firstly
, from the first information given, it can be seen that international
research
students
 extremely upsurged from 5192
students
 in 2001 to 14953
students
 in 2010.
Furthermore
, it made the total number of
research
students
 uplifted from 38849 to 54081
students
 from 2001 to 2010.
Secondly
, the diagram illustrates that both male and female local
research
students
 percentage significantly decreased from 43% to 39% for males and 35% for females.
Whereas
, the international
research
students
 percentage by gender climbed from 9% to 12% for males and 4% to 15% for females.
Thus
, it
also
 shows that the female foreign
research
students
 were higher than the male and for domestic
research
students
, it was the male who was higher than the female.
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