Some people believe that school children should not be given homework by their teachers, whereas others argue that homework plays an important role in the education of children. Discuss both of these views and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
The youth of every nation is its valuable resource. The responsibility for change, progress and innovation lies on their shoulders. They can make or mar the society. the other side some
Although
it is believed by major strata of society that the education system should not be given homework
teachers,Change preposition
on
people
believe that homework
plays an important role in the education of children
. This
essay intends to analyse both viewpoints, however
, based on the latter thought.
To begin
with, one
of the paramount reasons behind some people
thinking students not be given homework
by their faculty could be because of workload. These days life is so busy youth are not getting time
they have lots of other extracurricular activities to do like yoga classes, dance classes, creative writing and many more. Because of these reasons, children
are not able to manage time
and because of incomplete work, they suffer from depression which is very common nowadays. For example
, one
of my neighbours committed suicide because of time
management
he was not able to accomplish his homework
on time
. Therefore
, workload is one
of the reasons why homework
should not given by their teachers.
On the other hand
, few people
think homework
plays an important role in the education of children
because of this
students will learn how to manage time
in life as they are a valuable resource of the country they should know about time
management
. For instance
, in India one
of the toughest exams is UPSC and it is all about time
management
, Students should complete an answer of 250 words within 9 minutes. Secondly
by this
children
will also
not be distracted by things like social networking and so on. These days these things are very common. Hence
, by this
, they can learn time
management
and they will not be distracted by other things.
In conclusion, many people
think because of workload homework
should not be assigned by faculty and other beliefs by giving home assignments youth will learn time
management
and will not be distracted.Submitted by shubhashish.bobby on
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Introduction
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Body paragraphs
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Examples
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Conclusion
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