Some people say that hospitals should spend more money on buying technology devices, others argue more money should be spent on having more doctors and nurses. Discuss both theses views and give your own opinion.

It is said that more high-tech

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should be purchased by hospitals

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some others, including myself, argue that more money should be spent on recruiting

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and

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because of the increasing numbers of

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, and better connections between experts and ordinary people. On the one hand, some people believe that having more contemporary

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would be more beneficial in hospitals. These

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are facilitators to do

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faster and with more accuracy.

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identifying concealed symptoms inside the body, discovering diseases with no obvious signs, examining faster, and printing out test results with the least possible defect.

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, people would be confident about referring to these places.

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, in my view,

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costly maintenance, these

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usually require well-trained individuals, and with any failure happening during the process, extra expenses would be needed to get them repaired.

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, there are a lot of reasons for the effectiveness of having more professionals.

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, the increasing numbers of

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these days, because of many problems,

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as various types of pollution, unsuitable diet, and sedentary lifestyle, has left no choice but to have more

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and

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to accelerate

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, mutual understanding between professionals themselves and

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is considerable.

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can consult with others before expressing their final opinion, or before making a tough decision, and

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would be able to spend more time communicating with

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and their relatives to reduce their stress.

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, both

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would enhance the reputation of hospitals by doing routine

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better and providing satisfaction for their

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. As outlined above,

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more money for purchasing high-tech facilities releases experts from many routine

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, there are numerous merits,

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as facing growing numbers of

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, and better interaction, that require more

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and

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.