The line graph below shows changes in the amount and type of junk food consumed by Australian teenagers from 1975 to 2000
The line graph illustrates the consumption rate of three different
type
of fast food: Change to a plural noun
types
pizza
, fish
and chips
, and hambergers
, eaten by Australian youths between 1975 to 2000. Correct your spelling
hamburgers
hamburger
Overall
, while
the the
number of consuming times in Remove the redundancy
apply
fish
and chips
encountered a downward trend, those of pizza
and hambergers
faced an upward trend.
At the beginning of the graph, in 1975, it can be obviously observed that Correct your spelling
hamburgers
fish
and chips
are
the most popular Wrong verb form
were
amongs
Australian Correct your spelling
among
amongst
adolesences
because they had Correct your spelling
adolescences
adolescence
adolescents
it
100 times per year, Correct pronoun usage
them
whereas
pizza
and hambergers
were consumed approximately 5 and 10, respectively.
In the following years, the trend had been changing. Correct your spelling
hamburgers
While
the consuming
rates of both Replace the word
consumption
pizza
and hambergers
Correct your spelling
hamburgers
was
continuingly rising and reach Change the verb form
were
its
peak in 1995 at approximately 85 and 100, respectively, and the numbers still remain afterwards, those of Correct pronoun usage
their
fish
and chips
was fluctuating
from 1975 to 1985 and significantly declined to 40 Wrong verb form
fluctuated
at the end
of given
period.Add an article
a given
the given
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words pizza, fish, chips, hambergers with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "graph" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "approximately" was used 2 times.
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