The chart below gives information about the production of grains, measured in millionmetric tons, from the years 2010 to 2015, with projections until 2030.

The chart below gives information about the production of grains, measured in millionmetric tons, from the years 2010 to 2015, with projections until 2030.
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The table provides information about the production of grains, the quantities are shown in million metric tons, over the period of 20
years
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from 2010 to 2020, with predictions until 2030.
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, there is a rising tendency with the exception of rice, which is expected to
rise
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with fluctuations. In 2010, wheat started at 100, where it rose steadily reaching 107 in 2020 and it is projected to
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to 110 in the subsequent
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. In comparison, rice fluctuated both ways, where it dropped from 24.7 to 24.3 and increased up to 24.5 in 2020.
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, it is expected to
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significantly to 25.5 in 2030.
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, barley experienced steady growth from 50 to 80 in ten
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and it is projected to
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to 100 in 2030. In comparison, maize had a slight growth from 34 to 34.5 and it will increase slightly by 0.5 in subsequent
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