The bar chart below shows the popularity of well-known Instagram accounts in 2018 and 2021. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The following diagram illustrates how many well-known people have
followers
on their Instagram accounts in 2018 and 2021. It is conspicuous all of them have dramatic growth.
According to
the bar chart, Cristiano Ronaldo had 100 million
followers
approximately in 2018, and in 2021 has slightly over 300 million
. Furthermore
, In 2018 The Rock had almost 100 million
fans
and after a considerable increase, he achieved 250 million
. Moreover
, Selena Gomez had over 100 million
fans
in 2018, and in 2021 she had significant growth and earned slightly less than 250 million
fans
. Plus, Kylie Jenner had 100 million
followers
and in 2021 she achieved almost 250 million
fans
. Also
, Ariana Grande earned 100 million
followers
then
in 2021 nearly 250 million
people followed her.
In conclusion, the below chart demonstrates the popularity of well-known Instagram accounts in 2018 and 2021. In addition
, all these popular persons
had notable development between these years.Submitted by bazarjanimohammadreza83 on
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