The table provides information about the projected costings for sustainable forestry in West Africa, Central America and South-east Asia within the next 5 years, while pie chart indicates spendings of the projects for the first year.

The table provides information about the projected costings for sustainable forestry in West Africa, Central America and South-east Asia within the next 5 years, while pie chart indicates spendings of the projects for the first year.
The bar
chart
illustrates the investment
of
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sustainable forestry in three different nations for
next
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the next
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five years, and
pie
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chart
shows how those
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expenditures
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expenditure
is
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are
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going to be distributed in
first
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year
among
five
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sections.
Overall
,
South- East
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Asia is the region
who
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is predicting
highest
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the highest
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number of
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expenditure
for sustainable forestry. West Africa has projected
lowest
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amount compared to others. In
first
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year
, a large
number of
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sum is allocated for salaries . With regards to
bar
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chart
,
South -East
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South-East
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Asia has budgeted 30
million
in
first
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year
and doubled it for 2nd
year
and 30
million
for
3rd
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and 50
million
each for
4th
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and 5th
year
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years
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.
Additionally
, Central America is going to allocate 20
million
for the project in the
first
year
and 12
million
for
second
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year
.
Furthermore
, They predicted 5
million
each for forestry for
year
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years
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3, 4 and 5.
On the other hand
,West
africa
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has predicted 10.5
million
for the
first
year
, followed by 7.5
million
for the second and 2.5
million
each for
third
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and fourth years.
Also
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2.5
million
is going to be budgeted for
fifth
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year
. When it comes to
pie
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the pie
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chart
, All regions have predicted their
expenditure
for
year
1, of which
maximum
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amount of payments for salaries
which
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accounted
50
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%. The next highest expense for set up cost.
Moreover
, Three regions have forecasted 10% of
expenditure
for
trainning
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training
their crew and they are going to allocate another 10% for administration purposes.
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