Some people think that children should receive formal training at school on how to be good parents in the future. Do you agree or disagree with this statement??

Different strokes for different folks. Youth upbringing plays a vital role in the community.a majority of society
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that pupils need to be provided with information regarding how to be supportive guardians in the time to come.
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the statement not only because of family values but beside
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for the future
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positive attitudes towards the infants.
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lessons for learners so they can understand the worth of households would be beneficial. toddlers are
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of their parents.
Government
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needs to take action if they don't contribute in
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are significant as
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as other services.
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, a BBC news survey reported that 30% of teenagers are fearful
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commitment.
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, minors have to be ready
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secure for their
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must
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set a goal for the future so they don't need to be monetary
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on others.
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, money can fulfill the needs of little
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.
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children who have no financial issues have 40% better coming times.
To sum up
, the biological guide course will be able to bring positive gestures for newborns. people going to easily connect with babies. it will build better relationships.
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