The graph below shows the number of tourists visting a particular Caribbean island between 2010 and 2017. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where revelant.
The given graph depicts the total
number
of tourists
who visited the Caribbean island
whether staying on cruise
ships
or on the island
from 2010 to 2017
Overall
, the total number
of tourists
increased noticeably throughout the given years. Whereas
, the figures of visitors
who stayed on cruise
ships
replaced from the least to the most popular.
To begin
with, in 2010, the quality of tourists
who stayed on cruise
ships
and on the island
was 0.1 million
and above 0.5 million
respectively. These figures rose until 2013 which
the Correct word choice
when
number
of visitors
on the island
remained stable for the next two years at 1,5 million
after that dropped by 0.5 million
tourists
in 2016 before hitting a peak of 1,5 million
in 2017. In contrast
, visitor numbers who preferred to stay on the cruise
continuously grew over the period and reached 2 million
in 2017.
The total number
of Caribbean island
visitors
was one million
in 2010. This
number
went up by .5 million
yearly and hit a high of 3.5 million
tourists
in 2017.
In conclusion, although
at the beginning of the period, the majority of the island
visitors
preferred staying on the island
, it was replaced by staying on cruise
ships
at the end
of the period.Submitted by dentdent4 on
Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.
Basic structure: Change the fifth paragraph.
▼
Vocabulary: Replace the words number, tourists, island, cruise, ships, visitors, million with synonyms.
▼
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "number of" in your introduction.
▼
Vocabulary: The word "figures" was used 2 times.
▼
Vocabulary: The word "give" was used 2 times.
▼
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 4 times.
▼
Vocabulary: The word "stayed" was used 3 times.
▼
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fifth paragraph.
▼
Essentional vocabulary list for IELTS Writing 7+
Learn how to write high-scoring essays with powerful words.Download Free PDF and start improving you writing skills today!