The graph and table below show the average monthly temperatures and the average number of hours of sunshine per year in three major cities. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph and table below show the average monthly temperatures and the average number of hours of sunshine per year in three major cities. 

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The two charts illustrate information on three prominent cities, including London, New York, and Sydney. The line chart indicates average monthly temperatures
while
the table chart shows the total sunshine per year in
hours
. New York placed first with the highest total emergence of sun up to 2,535
hours
in 12 months. It reaches its peak in July, and after that, it experiences a steady fall until December.
Next,
there is Sydney with a total of 2,473
hours
of sunshine per year and it peaks in January at over 25 Celcius.
However
, July becomes the month where it has a sharp drop to slightly over 15 Celcius.
Finally
, at the bottom, there is London with below 2,000
hours
of sunshine per year, approximately just a mere 1,180
hours
.
Overall
, each major cities have its own peak and lowest time when it comes to temperature.
Nonetheless
, one huge difference is Sydney peaked in January,
while
the other two had their lowest in the same month.
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