some people prefer to live in hot climates. Whereas others love the lifestyles in countries with cold climate. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

some people gravitate toward living in tropical
environment
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whereas
other
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favour living in
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countries with cold
climate
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.
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the diverse
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perspective
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perspectives
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of individuals
for
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living in
hot
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a hot
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or cold
climate
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. personally,
i
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belive
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believe
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that hot
climate
countries provide
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smoth
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smooth
living experience. On the one hand, hot
climate
countries provide
vast
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number of
activites
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activities
which make life happier, accessible, smooth,
enrich
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environemnt
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environment
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Task Achievement
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Coherence and Cohesion
Improve Coherence and Cohesion by organizing your ideas more logically, using a range of cohesive devices to link your ideas, and including both an introduction and a conclusion.

Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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  • scorching
  • bustling
  • rejuvenate
  • serenity
  • thriving
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  • hibernation
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