The two pie charts below show changes in world population by region between 1900 and 2000. Summarize the information by choosing and reporting the key features and make any relevant comparisons.

The two pie charts below show changes in world population by region between 1900 and 2000. 

Summarize the information by choosing and reporting the key features and make any relevant comparisons.
The charts illustrate world
population
changes in typical regions in a
century
.
Overall
, what can be clearly seen is that the installation saw the enhancement of the total
population
in the world from 1.6 billion to 6 billion in 100 years.
Furthermore
, Asia’s community was still dominating over 50% of the world even after a
century
, and the rest of the proportions comprised around 40% of all. Looking in more detail, the
population
in Asia had experienced a reduction, with an intake of 60% in 1900 to 54% in 2000, which made Asia the largest populated continent worldwide. Europe’s
population
, including Russia,
also
witnessed a decline in
population
, with 11% in the
century
.
However
, Europe has remained the second-highest
population
worldwide. On the other side, Africa, Latin America, the Middle East, and others have observed the development of
population
over a
century
,
while
the amount North America’s citizens has remained the same.
Submitted by narawriteshare9 on

Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Vocabulary: Replace the words population, century with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "changes" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "remained" was used 2 times.

Essentional vocabulary list for IELTS Writing 7+

Learn how to write high-scoring essays with powerful words.
Download Free PDF and start improving you writing skills today!
What to do next:
Look at other essays: