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The diagram below shows how the Australian Bureau of Meteorology collects up-to-the-minute information on the weather in order to produce reliable forecasts. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below.

The diagram below shows how the Australian Bureau of Meteorology collects up-to-the-minute information on the weather in order to produce reliable forecasts. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below.
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The diagram explains the
process
 of gathering
the
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real-time information
of
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on
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 weather by
Meteorology
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the Meteorology
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 Australian Bureau to predict a
possibility
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 status and announce
to
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it to
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 the public.
Overall
 the
process
consist
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 of 10 stages in transforming from the raw data to
a
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daily weather
informations
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information
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 starting with incoming information and ending with broadcasting
them
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it
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. At the beginning of the
process
, the
informations
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information
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come
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comes
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 from the satellite
to
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 analysis and
change
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 into a photo. The second way is that the raw data from the radar are plotted on the radar screen with
graphic
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a graphic
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 diagram, and the
last
 way is that
synoptic
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a synoptic
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 chart is created from the
informations
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information
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 which
are
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is
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 provided by drifting
buoy
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buoys
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 and
also
 radar or satellite as well. In the next stage of the
process
, the
forcasts
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forecasts
 are prepared for broadcasting by computer transmission. In the
last
 step, up-to-minute data are sent to the individuals or households
by
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the
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TV, radio and recorded
announcement
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announcements
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 as well.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "last".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words process with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "diagram" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "data" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "information" was used 5 times.
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