Nowadays more and more people are purchasing online instead of physically going to stores. Do you think this is a positive or negative development?

Nowadays more and more people are purchasing online

instead

of physically going to stores. Do you think

this

is a positive or negative development? These days , more

end

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and

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more humans are buying online

instead

of going on foot to shops. There are many positives and negatives about

this

topic and now I will show them in my

this

essay. On the one hand , there are many merits of

this

topic,

for example

, if you are ill or old person ,

this

kind of

purchases

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purchase

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is really

benefit

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beneficial

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for us because we can purchase without going to stores and delivers

of

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from

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these shops can be

provide

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us if they have got

this

serve.

On the other hand

, there are more drawbacks of

this

like if you get many clothes or other items

on

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online , on generally , you dislike

to do

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doing

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much more physical actions,

then

you can be

infect

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the

obesity

.

Obesity

is really dangerously for our lifestyle

cause

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because

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of

this

you can not do any

exercises

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exercise

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and if you do that , you can be tired faster than now your action , I think

this

is reality. Many countries of the

world

are

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mentioned

this

. Especially ,

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Health Organization . They reference to populations of the

world

every year. I think all of these are becoming

much more

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increasingly popular all over the

world

. They mean that ,

,

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We do physical exercises a less '' all of these get to

obesity

.

To conclude

, I believe that we can do all of

physical

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the physical

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activities like exercises and others . I completely disagree

to purchase

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with purchasing

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on

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online , cause of

this

, many populations of the

world

are

infecting

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to

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by

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obesity

.