Many people use written language in a less formal a nd more relaxed way. Why? Does this development have advantages and disadvantages?
For the past 30 years amount of internet users boomed from less than one billion people to over five billion.
Nowadays, we use written
language
more than ever before in our everyday lives due to
internet access increasing. That's the reason of written language
becoming more informal and simplified.
The main benefit is freedom of expression and increasing the likelihood of creating a cozy
, friendly atmosphere during conversations.
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cosy
For example
, studies show that refusing formalities in the corporate world, especially in IT companies helps employees not be afraid of asking questions, enhances
the amount of warm relations that in general benefits the working vibe Correct word choice
and enhances
consequently
profit is growing. But it's not only about lucre. In my view, informality between people is one of the marks of friendship, because I can't fully open up to a person being only formal.
On the other hand
. there are numerous disadvantages. Non-literary language
can lead to misunderstanding espacially
for foreigners Correct your spelling
especially
which
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who
firstly
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first
learning
academic English.
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Likewise
, frequent usage of informal language
affects writing skills in the academic area, latest
study of my university "ITMO" provides proof of that correlation. Students who often use slang and short phrases and Add an article
the latest
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apply Add a missing verb
do not
synonims
, complex sentences and ideas struggle with writing long texts, articles, Correct your spelling
synonyms
reports
and are less likely to succeed in the academic sphere. Correct word choice
and reports
Also
. they get worse grades than other students.
I can conclude that it's important to keep a balance in expression formality and practice your writing skills. I personally use unofficial language
with friends and close people, in university and with strangers I'm trying to be official.Submitted by kostennikov.danil on
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Ensure you provide a clear introduction and conclusion that state your position and summarise your main points. You have included these elements, but they could be refined and more clearly defined.
style
Avoid informal language and contractions in an academic essay to improve the formality of your writing.
vocabulary
Use a wider range of vocabulary to express your ideas with greater precision, and aim to include less common lexical items.
cohesion
Work on organizing ideas logically using a variety of cohesive devices. Your essay could benefit from clearer transitions and use of conjunctions.
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Make a greater effort to vary sentence length and structure to enhance readability.
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Be sure to proofread your essay for grammatical accuracy and typos ('lucre', 'espacially', 'synonims', etc.). Grammatical range and accuracy are key assessment criteria.
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- Sentence 2 - Example
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