The table describes the changes of people who went for international travel in 1990, 1995, 2000 and 2005. (million).

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THE TABLE ILLUSTRATES THE CHANGES IN THE NUMBER OF PEOPLE WHO WENT FOR INTERNATIONAL TRAVEL DURING 1990, 1995, 2000, AND 2005.

OVERALL

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, TOTAL INCREASES IN THE NUMBER OF PEOPLE

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SKYROCKETED DURING THE

YEARS

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. EUROPE HAD

EXIHIBTED

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EXHIBITED

THE NUMEROUS CHANGES

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THE

YEARS

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;

HOWEVER

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, THE NUMBER OF INTERNATIONAL TRAVEL IN

MIDDLE

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THE MIDDLE

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EAST PLACED IN THE

LAST

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WITH FEWER DIFFERENCES. EUROPE HAD REACHED A PEAK

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280.2 TO 400.2

MILLIONS

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WHICH REALISED THE TOPMOST CHANGES OVER THE COURSE OF 15

YEARS

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BESIDES

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, THE SECOND HIGHEST PLACE WAS OCCUPIED BY ASIA AND THE PACIFIC WHICH HAD SURGED BY 75.6

MILLION

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PEOPLE DURING THE 15

YEARS

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IN ADDITION

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, AMERICA

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EXHIBITED

UPWARD

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AN UPWARD

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TREND WHICH

RISED

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ROSE

BY AROUND 33

MILLION

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. REGARDING TO REST OF THE TABLE,

MIDDLE

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THE MIDDLE

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EAST HAD

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THE LOWEST INCREASE WHICH

GROWED

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GREW

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FROM 9.8 TO 15.8

MILLION

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BETWEEN 1990 AND 2005.

FURTHERMORE

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, AFRICA HAD INCREASED SLIGHTLY BY

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10.5

MILLION

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OVER THE 5

YEARS

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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 86%.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words years, million with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "changes" in your introduction.

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Vocabulary: The word "table" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 3 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 3 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "increases" was used 3 times.

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
2
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
13
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

153 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

significant increase
international travel
popular destinations
economic growth
technological advancements
ease of travel
cultural exchange
globalization
fluctuations
trend
millions of travelers
annual growth rate

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The table describes the changes of people who went for international travel in 1990, 1995, 2000 and 2005. (million).

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