The table below shows the type of accommodation chosen by foreign students studying English in the city of Hamilton and other related information.

The table below shows the type of accommodation chosen by foreign students studying English in the city of Hamilton and other related information.
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Remarkable information is provided regarding the number and rate of foreign learners in four nations that speak English by given bar chart and table, respectively. From an
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view, it can be seen that the USA and Canada had the highest and lowest number of
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from foreign lands, respectively. What’s more, the proportion of strange
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in Australia. By a closer examination, it is obvious that the USA was a pioneer in both 2004 and 2012 years with about 170,000 and 240,000 foreign
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, which were about 2% of the total
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. Britain and Australia were equal in 2004 with nearly 120,000
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,
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, the proportion of Britain foreign
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was 9 per cent which was 10
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lower than in Australia. In the next 8 years, both grew by an average of 4.5%. Canada had about 40 foreign
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in 2004 and in 2012, it reached 60.
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, the volume of foreign
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increased from 5% to 7%.

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