The table below gives information about student enrolments at Bristol University in 1928, 1958 and 2008. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The chart compares the
number
, sex and distance from university for the students
of the
Bristol University in three different years in Correct article usage
apply
timeline
. it generally reveals that the Correct article usage
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number
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enrolments rose sharply and at the same time, more Correct your spelling
of
students
come from far away from Bristol.
from 1928 to 1958, number
of enrolments Change the article
a number
the number
growed
approximately 5 times from 218 to 1046. Correct your spelling
grew
Then
, it growed
nearly 6 times from 1046 to 6377 until 2008. As the Correct your spelling
grew
number
of applies
rocketed, the percentage of the Replace the word
applications
foreigner
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foreign
students
attending the university had a slight improvment
from 5% to 6% until 1958, continued by a significant growth to 28% in 2008.
As for the sex of the applicants, the percentage of both male and female Correct your spelling
improvement
students
fluctuated. The number
of felame
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female
students
had an overall
growth, from 1928 to 2008, with a mildly
decrease in 1958. Change the adverb
mild
In contrast
, the number
of male students
had a 10 percent
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per cent
raise
from 1928 to 1958, with an Correct your spelling
rise
overall
fall to 46% in 2008.
In conclusion, in the timeline between 1928 to 2008, the number
of enrolments had a huge raise
, continued by an increase in overseas Correct your spelling
rise
students
and a fair division between male and female students
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