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The table below gives information about student enrolments at Bristol University in 1928, 1958 and 2008. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The table below gives information about student enrolments at Bristol University in 1928, 1958 and 2008. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The chart compares the
number
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, sex and distance from university for the
students
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 of
the
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Bristol University in three different years in
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. it generally reveals that the
number
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or
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of
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 enrolments rose sharply and at the same time, more
students
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 come from far away from Bristol. from 1928 to 1958,
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number
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a number
the number
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 of enrolments
growed
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grew
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 approximately 5 times from 218 to 1046.
Then
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, it
growed
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grew
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 nearly 6 times from 1046 to 6377 until 2008. As the
number
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 of
applies
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applications
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 rocketed, the percentage of the
foreigner
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students
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 attending the university had a slight
improvment
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improvement
 from 5% to 6% until 1958, continued by a significant growth to 28% in 2008. As for the sex of the applicants, the percentage of both male and female
students
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 fluctuated. The
number
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 of
felame
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female
students
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 had an
overall
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 growth, from 1928 to 2008, with a
mildly
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 decrease in 1958.
In contrast
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, the
number
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 of male
students
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 had a 10
percent
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per cent
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raise
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rise
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 from 1928 to 1958, with an
overall
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 fall to 46% in 2008. In conclusion, in the timeline between 1928 to 2008, the
number
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 of enrolments had a huge
raise
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rise
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, continued by an increase in overseas
students
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 and a fair division between male and female
students
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.
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "overall".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words number, students with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 5 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "growth" was used 2 times.
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