The bar chart shows the scores of teams A, B, and C over four different seasons.
The bar chart illustrates the scores of the three
teams
(A, B
, and C
) in four different seasons. It's crystal clear that team
B
scored far higher than the other two teams
all the seasons, but it also
slowly decreased over these periods.
Overall
, we can see that teams
A and C
were lower than team
B
in all years (2002, 2003, 2004, and 2005), and it goes like this
in all years.
Taking a closer look at 2002, the score of Team
B
exceeded that of the other two teams
. Team
A had 5 points
, and Team
C
had 10 points
. After the year
2002, team
B
slowly decreased year
by year
, but it remained above the points
of the other teams
.
However
, teams
A and C
rose after 2003. In fact, in 2004, Team
B
almost caught up with Team
A, but there were still 8 points
, so they couldn’t. However
, sadly, Team
C
always had the lowest points
among the other two teams
, so it was always at the bottom of the chart.
In the final year
, all teams
decreased from the other three years. Even though, when we look at the other teams
, team
B
still had the highest score. While
teams
A and C
saw their point scores reverse and drop by 8 and 5 points
, respectively,Submitted by haticecoza on
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