A friend of yours is going on holiday and has asked you to recommend a destination. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter recommend a good place that you have visited before for a holiday say where you went and where you stayed say what you can do there and what the food was like
Dear Sara
I hope
this
letter finds you healthy and wealthy. I am writing to draw your attention to Vancouver
as the most interesting holiday destination from my standpoint.
Let me explain in more detail. I have been to Vancouver
twice, it is not only surrounded by beautiful landscapes but also
provides you with good opportunities for shopping. There are several harbours, forests, and outlets which I described for you in the attached file.
The last
time I was there was last
September. I was accommodated at the ABC hostel which is located downtown just near Gastown.
There are plenty of activities to do depending on your budget, but I firmly recommend to try fly over Vancouver
which is located beside Vancouver
Central Hall. The most important part of Vancouver
is the numerous options to eat. I highly recommend Akbarjoje restaurant. It was outstanding!
I hope you will enjoy Vancouver
and I'm waiting to see your photos from there.
With love
AliSubmitted by ali on
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coherence cohesion
Ensure the letter has a clear and logical structure by organising the content into paragraphs each dedicated to a specific aspect of the recommendation, such as the destination’s attractions, accommodation, and culinary experiences.
task achievement
To enhance task achievement, it is important to address all aspects of the prompt. You have effectively met this by recommending a place, describing where you stayed, what one can do there, and the food. Consider expanding on personal experiences to provide a more compelling recommendation.
coherence cohesion
Consider using transitional phrases to improve the flow between sentences and paragraphs, enhancing the letter’s overall readability.
task achievement
Maintain a friendly and engaging tone throughout the letter to reflect the purpose of writing to a friend. You’ve done well in this aspect, keeping the letter personal and warm.
The Closing
The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.
Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.
Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)
- Yours faithfully,
Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)
- Yours sincerely,
Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)
- Best regards,
- Warm wishes,