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The graph below gives information on the differences in clothing exports from three different countries

The graph below gives information on the differences in clothing exports from three different countries
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The given data
illustract
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illustrate
 the various
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clothing exports from Colombia, Japan and
Myanmar
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 from 1999 to 2003. Generally speaking, the
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of
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 clothing exports in
Myanmar
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 is the largest.
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 with, in
Myanmar
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, there is a dramatic increase in clothing
export
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exports
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 from 1999 to 2001.
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rised
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raised
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 from 0
dollars
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 to 950
millions
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 of
dollars
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.
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, it dropped significantly in the following year which
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 to 350 million
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dollars
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.
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from 1999 to 2000, the trend of clothing
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 in Colombia and
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myanmar
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 is opposite. Colombia's clothing export grew
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from 450
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millions
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million
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of
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dollars
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 to 520
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millions
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million
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dollars
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while
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Myanmar
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Myanmar's
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 went down from 580
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millions
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million
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of
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dollars
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 to 550
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millions
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million
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dollars
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. They both increased steadily from 2001 to 2002 and dropped from 2002 to 2003.

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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words myanmar, dollars, millions with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 2 times.
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