The graph below shows the number of tourists visiting a particular Caribbean island between 2010 and 2017. Summerise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The line graph below represents how many tourists visited the Caribbean
island
and spent their time on cruise
ships
or on the island
from 2010 to 2017.
Overall
, the tourist population experienced a steady upward trend during the given years, and more visitors
preferred to stay on cruise
ships
than stay on the island
.
Firstly
, regarding cruise
ship options, the graph started at 0.25 million
visitors
initially
, and it fluctuated for the first three years. At that same time, the number of visitors
who preferred to stay on the islands, started at 0.75 million
in 2010, which was twice as high as the former. Following that, the number increased remarkably from 0.75 to 1.5 million
in 2013.
After 2013, both trends shifted considerably. In comparison with staying on the island
, those staying on cruise
ships
rocketed from 0.5 to 2 million
till 2017. Although
the number of visitors
staying on the island
was higher than those on the cruise
ships
initially
, it levelled off at 1.5 million
for three years and was even surpassed by the latter in 2016.Submitted by Chloe on
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