For schoolchildren, their teachers have more influence on their intelligence and social development than their parents. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In "Gestalt" theories, a psychologist's school of thinking, there are many influencing factors of social development. Certainly, It's true that

teachers

have an important influence on the intelligence of children, but it's not correct to think it is only the

teachers

' responsibility. In

this

essay, I will explain what is my opinion about

this

question. First of all,

teachers

and parents have an essential role in the good growth of children. As I wrote, Gestalt theories think that all types of environments are crucial; If one

child

grew up in a dysfunctional family and he goes at good school,

this

child

would be aggressive and insecure.

However

, if

this

child

has a perfect, functional family, where all people pay attention to him, but his classroom is dysfunctional, most probably

this

child

may have social difficulties, and fewer relationships. About my experience, I grew up in a small family; we are my dad, my mum and, I. My parents gave me many attention, and they made me more and more happy.

Furthermore

, They were cooperative with me when I committed mistakes.

For

this

reason, I was a quiet

child

, I respected all people and, now I'm smart and I've got many relationships. Unfortunately, in my classroom, there was one teacher who had suffered from nervous anorexia, and

this

was terrible for me because she bulled me about my body.

Finally

, I think that it is not true that only

teachers

have the responsibility for a

child

's development and intelligence. I think that it is essential for children to have a good environment who grew up.